tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220793439289033091.post8217536645726505550..comments2023-04-03T00:46:34.401-07:00Comments on Words Apart : Me, My Ego and IOptimisticrevolutionaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13522658003328150697noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220793439289033091.post-35225416285816482732012-07-23T01:47:35.792-07:002012-07-23T01:47:35.792-07:00This is beautifully written, i love it :)This is beautifully written, i love it :)Anum Azizhttp://paperwingsandink.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220793439289033091.post-242143304390213582012-03-13T12:34:34.101-07:002012-03-13T12:34:34.101-07:00Mohammed Zain! This was beautiful. I had to read i...Mohammed Zain! This was beautiful. I had to read it aloud because I've gotten used to the cadence you use in your poetry. It flowed very softly, rising when the moment was necessary and the rhyme scheme kept the musicality going well. The only issue I have is with the vagueness of the actual poem. I know what you're saying, but I need more imagery to help me cross the bridge to complete understanding. Those who do not know you won't be able to ask you to explain the depth behind it, iA if it were to become published. But bro, good job, it was great :)Amber Majidhttp://am08j.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com